Comments on: What do you think of my story? PLEASE read.? http://www.mvconnection.com/selling-products-on-ebay/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-please-read Wed, 10 Aug 2011 18:16:59 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Me http://www.mvconnection.com/selling-products-on-ebay/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-please-read/comment-page-1#comment-984 Me Wed, 30 Dec 2009 10:20:59 +0000 http://www.mvconnection.com/build-a-niche-store/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-please-read#comment-984 It's definitely interesting and has a ton of potential, but you need to work on spelling. I saw more than a few misspelled words in there, so definitely fix that. I liked it, but also some of the wording is awkward. For example, "Anyway, since I’m sure you don’t want to hear about how genetics are past from parent to offspring, I’ll catch you up on my current client." That was a kind of awkward transition. But yeah, I like the idea, so keep working on it!<br><b>References : </b><br> It’s definitely interesting and has a ton of potential, but you need to work on spelling. I saw more than a few misspelled words in there, so definitely fix that. I liked it, but also some of the wording is awkward. For example, "Anyway, since I’m sure you don’t want to hear about how genetics are past from parent to offspring, I’ll catch you up on my current client." That was a kind of awkward transition. But yeah, I like the idea, so keep working on it!
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]]> By: blah [= http://www.mvconnection.com/selling-products-on-ebay/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-please-read/comment-page-1#comment-983 blah [= Wed, 30 Dec 2009 10:14:59 +0000 http://www.mvconnection.com/build-a-niche-store/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-please-read#comment-983 holy crap this is so much better than the books i write. XD good job, keep going.<br><b>References : </b><br> holy crap this is so much better than the books i write. XD good job, keep going.
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]]> By: Laina http://www.mvconnection.com/selling-products-on-ebay/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-please-read/comment-page-1#comment-982 Laina Wed, 30 Dec 2009 09:32:59 +0000 http://www.mvconnection.com/build-a-niche-store/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-please-read#comment-982 Holy Fudge nugget!!! I would soooooo read this book!!!!!<br><b>References : </b><br> Holy Fudge nugget!!! I would soooooo read this book!!!!!
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]]> By: Pocket Protectorate http://www.mvconnection.com/selling-products-on-ebay/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-please-read/comment-page-1#comment-981 Pocket Protectorate Wed, 30 Dec 2009 09:06:59 +0000 http://www.mvconnection.com/build-a-niche-store/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-please-read#comment-981 It's good. I like it... Keep up the good work...sounds like you'll be fine author some day... (Make sure you have a "theme" and "plot" in mind that teaches the reader all about the intricacies of being a thief, the upsides, the downsides, and have the main character exhibit transformational growth and learn something from the whole story...In other words...what's the reason for the story. What do we learn from this tale of thievery, and what did the main character learn...?)<br><b>References : </b><br> It’s good. I like it…

Keep up the good work…sounds like you’ll be fine author some day…

(Make sure you have a "theme" and "plot" in mind that teaches the reader all about the intricacies of being a thief, the upsides, the downsides, and have the main character exhibit transformational growth and learn something from the whole story…In other words…what’s the reason for the story. What do we learn from this tale of thievery, and what did the main character learn…?)
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